Grade 5 · English language artsAbout 150 minutes
English language artsGrade 5About 150 minutes

Give an oral report with logically sequenced details, appropriate facts and descriptive details, clear speech at an understandable pace, and a list of sources

Four sessions: sequencing details and choosing facts; marking and rehearsing a script for clear speech and pace; the list of sources; then the reports themselves, given to the class.

Ohio learning standards this draft targets

ela-2026:SL.5.4aela-2026:SL.5.4bela-2026:SL.5.4cela-2026:W.5.8c

Read the standard text

ela-2026:SL.5.4a Logically sequenced details;

ela-2026:SL.5.4b Appropriate facts and relevant, descriptive details to support main ideas or themes;

ela-2026:SL.5.4c Clear speech at an understandable pace.

ela-2026:W.5.8c Provide a list of sources.

Provisional targets. Clause-by-clause educational review is still pending.

Section 1 · LearnLearn the idea
Priya's invented observation: the shadow of a 100-centimeter stick measured 150 cm at 9:30 a.m., 70 cm at 11:30 a.m., 45 cm at 1:30 p.m. and 70 cm at 3:30 p.m. The 4 bars are in time order, the order her report uses; the shortest of the 4 measured shadows came at 1:30 p.m. on the clock.Priya's invented observation: the shadow of a 100-centimeter stick measured 150 cm at 9:30 a.m., 70 cm at 11:30 a.m., 45 cm at 1:30 p.m. and 70 cm at 3:30 p.m. The 4 bars are in time order, the order her report uses; the shortest of the 4 measured shadows came at 1:30 p.m. on the clock.Shadow of a 100-centimeter stick on May 8(invented observation)0501001501509:30 a.m.7011:30 a.m.451:30 p.m.703:30 p.m.cm
Priya's invented observation: the shadow of a 100-centimeter stick measured 150 cm at 9:30 a.m., 70 cm at 11:30 a.m., 45 cm at 1:30 p.m. and 70 cm at 3:30 p.m. The 4 bars are in time order, the order her report uses; the shortest of the 4 measured shadows came at 1:30 p.m. on the clock.

Learning goal: This lesson teaches the three parts of Ohio's 2026 standard SL.5.4 and one part of W.5.8, first implemented in 2027-28. You will report on an informational topic or present an opinion using logically sequenced details (SL.5.4a); appropriate facts and relevant, descriptive details to support main ideas or themes (SL.5.4b); and clear speech at an understandable pace (SL.5.4c). Because a report is built from relevant information from personal experiences or sources, you will also provide a list of sources (W.5.8c). Taking notes and paraphrasing for research are taught in the companion research lessons; this lesson starts from notes already taken.

An oral report. An oral report tells listeners about a topic, or presents your opinion and supports it, out loud. Listeners cannot reread a sentence they missed, so a report has to be easier to follow than a written page: the order must be clear, every detail must earn its place, and the speech must be clear enough and slow enough to understand the first time.

Logically sequenced details. Sequence means order. A logical sequence is an order a listener can follow because each part prepares for the next. Choose the order that fits the topic:

- Time order for events or observations: first, then, later, finally.
- Steps of a process for how something works or is made.
- Whole to parts for describing a thing: name it, then its parts.
- Cause and effect when one thing makes another happen.
- For an opinion: state the opinion, give reasons in a sensible order (many speakers save the strongest for last), support each reason with facts, then restate the opinion.

Every report also needs an opening that names the topic and main idea, and a conclusion that sums it up. Two conditions make a sequence logical. Explain a term before you use it: if listeners do not know what a gnomon is, "the gnomon's shadow moves" means nothing. And keep details about one point together instead of returning to it later. Transition words such as first, because of this, later that day and finally tell listeners where they are. To test a sequence, move one detail to a different place: if the report stops making sense, the original place was logical.

Appropriate facts and relevant, descriptive details. An appropriate fact is accurate and belongs to the main idea it supports. Check every fact against your source; a fact remembered wrongly is not appropriate, however interesting it sounds. The same rule holds when you report on a story or poem: each detail you choose must support the theme you name. A relevant, descriptive detail helps listeners picture the point: "the shadow shrank to less than half the length of the stick" is easier to see than "the shadow got smaller." A detail can be true and still not belong. Before you present, name the main idea each detail supports; if you cannot, cut it.

Clear speech at an understandable pace. Clear speech means every word can be heard and understood. Speak loudly enough for the back row, face the audience, say the ends of words (measured, not measur), and practice names and new terms until they come out smoothly. Pace is the speed of your speech. An understandable pace is close to the speed of ordinary careful conversation, with pauses. Pause at the end of each sentence and between sections. Slow down for numbers, names, new terms and your main idea, because those are what listeners must remember. Nervous speakers usually speed up, so plan your pauses in the script. Two checks before the real report: record yourself and listen, and ask a partner to repeat your main idea and one number. If the partner cannot, slow down at that place. Replace fillers such as "um" with a silent pause.

A list of sources. A list of sources names everything your report used, so that listeners and readers can find the information and so that the people whose work you used get credit. Include only sources you actually used. For an oral report, show the list on a final slide or a handout and say, "My sources are listed on the last slide." This lesson uses one simple pattern; your teacher may ask for a particular style.

- Book: Author's last name, first name. Title. Publisher, year.
- Article or web page: Author's last name, first name, if one is given. "Title of the article or page." Name of the website or publication, date posted if given. Web address. Date you used it.
- Interview: Last name, first name of the person. Interview by your name. Date.
- Your own observation: Your last name, first name. What you observed and where. Date.

Put the entries in alphabetical order by the first word of each entry: usually the author's last name, or the title when there is no author (skip A, An and The when you alphabetize). When two entries begin with the same last name, the first names decide the order. A list of search words, or "Google," is not a source; a search engine only helps you find sources.

Original article — Telling Time with a Shadow (written for this lesson; no author is named)

Long before clocks with gears, people told time by watching shadows. A sundial shows the time of day by the position of a shadow. It has two main parts: a flat face marked with hour lines, and the part that casts the shadow, called the gnomon. The shadow moves because Earth turns. Earth spins once about every 24 hours, so from the ground the Sun seems to rise in the east, cross the sky and set in the west, and the gnomon's shadow moves across the face. Shadows also change length. In the morning and late afternoon, when the Sun is low, shadows are long; when the Sun is highest, shadows are shortest. In Ohio the shortest shadow of the day points north. A sundial has limits. It cannot tell time at night or when clouds block the Sun, and it shows sun time, which is not always clock time. Clocks across a whole time zone show the same time, and daylight saving time moves clocks ahead one hour, so in much of Ohio in summer the Sun is highest around 1:30 p.m. on the clock, not at 12:00.

Priya's research records (Priya, her grandfather, the book and the measurements are invented for this lesson). Article: "Telling Time with a Shadow," in her class reading packet, no author or date given, used on May 5, 2026. Book: Clocks Without Gears by Tess Moreno, Lantern Hill Press, 2021. Interview: her grandfather, Ravi Shah, who built a sundial for his garden, interviewed by Priya Shah on May 6, 2026; he told her that he had to line up his dial's noon line with true north, and that he found north first by marking where the shortest shadow of a straight stick pointed. Observation: on May 8, 2026, Priya measured the shadow of a 100-centimeter stick on the school playground at four times: 150 centimeters at 9:30 a.m., 70 at 11:30 a.m., 45 at 1:30 p.m. and 70 at 3:30 p.m.

Section 2 · ModelWork through the examples

Worked example 1 — Putting details in a logical sequence (SL.5.4a). Priya's note cards are shuffled: (a) sun time is not clock time; (b) a sundial has a face and a gnomon; (c) my four shadow measurements; (d) the shadow moves because Earth turns; (e) my grandfather lined up his dial with true north, found from the shortest shadow of a stick. Her main idea: a sundial tells time with a shadow that moves and changes length as Earth turns, but it has limits. Order: opening with the main idea; (b) whole to parts, because listeners need gnomon before anything else; (d) cause and effect, why the shadow moves; (c) time order, the measurements from 9:30 to 3:30; (e) an example of using the shortest shadow, which follows the measurements; (a) the limits, which explain why the shortest of her four measured shadows came at 1:30, not at noon; conclusion. Test: if (c) came before (d), listeners would hear the numbers before knowing why the shadow moves at all.

Worked example 2 — Choosing facts and descriptive details (SL.5.4b). Main idea of one section: the shadow changes length during the day. Appropriate fact: at 9:30 a.m. the shadow of the 100-centimeter stick measured 150 centimeters, and at 1:30 p.m. it measured 45. Relevant, descriptive detail: "by early afternoon the shadow had shrunk to less than half the length of the stick." Cut: "the stick was painted green," which is true but supports no main idea. Check: 45 is less than half of 100, so the descriptive detail is accurate.

Worked example 3 — Marking a script for clear speech and pace (SL.5.4c). Priya's script line: "At nine thirty / the shadow was one hundred fifty centimeters long. // By one thirty / it was only forty-five. //" One slash marks a short pause; two slashes mark a full stop. She underlines one hundred fifty and forty-five to remind herself to slow down on the numbers, and she practices gnomon (the g is silent: NOH-mon) until she can say it smoothly. Her partner repeats "150 at 9:30, 45 at 1:30" back to her, so the pace works.

Worked example 4 — Building the list of sources (W.5.8c). From her records, Priya writes four entries and puts them in alphabetical order by first word: Moreno, Shah (Priya), Shah (Ravi), Telling. Two entries start with Shah, so the first names decide the order: P comes before R. The article has no author, so its entry starts with its title. Final slide:

Sources

Moreno, Tess. Clocks Without Gears. Lantern Hill Press, 2021.

Shah, Priya. Shadow measurements of a 100-centimeter stick, school playground. May 8, 2026.

Shah, Ravi. Interview by Priya Shah. May 6, 2026.

"Telling Time with a Shadow." Class reading packet, no date given. Used May 5, 2026.

Worked example 5 — Sequencing an opinion (SL.5.4a). Opinion: "Our class should keep a daily shadow log for one month." Reason 1: it shows how shadows change through the day; support: Priya's four measurements went from 150 to 45 to 70 centimeters. Reason 2: it shows how the shortest shadow of the day changes from day to day, which needs many days of data; support: the article says shadows are shortest when the Sun is highest, and the Sun is not equally high every day. Restate the opinion and ask for a vote. The order is opinion, reasons each with a fact, restatement; the reason a listener needs first (what the log shows in one day) comes before the one that builds on it (what it shows over many days).

Section 3 · DoPractice, demonstrate, and explain

Representation task — report plan. On five numbered cards, plan a report from Priya's records: opening with the main idea, three body sections and a conclusion. On each body card write the order you chose (time order, whole to parts, cause and effect), one appropriate fact, one descriptive detail, and the main idea both support. Mark one place for a pause and one number to say slowly. On a sixth card, write Priya's list of sources from memory and check it against Worked example 4.

Independent performance. Prepare a two- to three-minute oral report on an informational topic you have studied, or present an opinion on a class question. Use at least two sources, and one of them may be your own observation or an interview. Rehearse twice with a partner, then present to the class, showing your list of sources on a final slide or handout.

Success criteria: My opening names the topic and main idea, my details follow an order I can name, and I explain each term before I use it. Every fact is accurate and supports a main idea, and I use at least two descriptive details that help listeners picture a point. Everyone can hear me; I pause between sections and slow down for numbers, names and my main idea, and my partner can repeat my main idea and one number. My list of sources includes every source I used, each entry follows the pattern for its kind, and the list is in alphabetical order.

Section 4 · Check8-question lesson practice test

An adult may read the prompts aloud. Answer independently with words, objects, drawings or a demonstration before opening the answer guide. Award 1 point for a correct result or claim and 1 point for a matching explanation or demonstration; where a question asks only for a result (a corrected sentence, a spelling, a count), a fully correct result earns both points, and the answer guide shows what a complete response contains. Record prompting separately. The total (two points per question) is local practice feedback, not an Ohio proficiency level.

Problem 1

Put these parts of Priya's report in a logical order and name the kind of order used for each middle part: (a) why the shadow moves; (b) the conclusion; (c) the four shadow measurements; (d) what a sundial and a gnomon are; (e) the opening with the main idea.

Show worked solution

(e), (d), (a), (c), (b). The middle uses three kinds of order. The opening names the topic and main idea. Whole to parts comes next, because listeners need the meaning of gnomon before anything else; cause and effect explains why the shadow moves; the measurements follow in time order, 9:30 to 3:30; the conclusion sums up. Another order earns credit only if every term is explained before it is used and the reason for each place is given.

Problem 2

A classmate presents the opinion "Our school should build a sundial in the garden." The reasons on her cards are in this order: (1) "Sundials are cool." (2) "We could check our shadow measurements every day." (3) "It would cost less than a new clock." Then she restates her opinion. How would you improve the sequence and the reasons?

Show worked solution

Reason 1, "Sundials are cool," is a feeling with no fact behind it, so it should be dropped or replaced with a reason that can be supported. A logical opinion sequence states the opinion, gives each reason with a supporting fact, and restates the opinion at the end. Reason 3 needs a fact from a source, such as a real price, before it can be used. Reason 2 can be supported with Priya's four measurements, which show the shadow changing during one day, and many speakers put the strongest supported reason last. A sample revised set of cards: (1) Opinion: "Our school should build a sundial in the garden." (2) Reason: "We could check our shadow measurements every day." Fact: Priya measured the shadow of a 100-centimeter stick at 150 centimeters at 9:30 a.m. and 45 centimeters at 1:30 p.m. on one day. (3) Reason 1 replaced: "A sundial would show us how Earth's turning moves shadows," supported by the article's explanation that the shadow moves because Earth turns. (4) Reason 3 left out, because no source gives a price. (5) Restate the opinion and ask the principal to approve it. Credit needs a named order, a fix for reason 1 and a supporting fact for each reason that stays; other orders earn credit if they are explained, and no outside research is needed.

Problem 3

For the main idea "a sundial's shadow changes length during the day," choose one appropriate fact and one relevant, descriptive detail from Priya's records, and name one true detail you would leave out.

Show worked solution

Fact: the shadow of the 100-centimeter stick measured 150 centimeters at 9:30 a.m. and 45 centimeters at 1:30 p.m. Descriptive detail: by early afternoon the shadow had shrunk to less than half the length of the stick. Leave out a true detail that does not support this main idea, such as the grandfather lining up his dial with true north, found from the shortest shadow of a stick, which belongs in a different section. Each fact must match the records exactly.

Problem 4

A speaker says, "The shortest shadow always comes at exactly 12:00 noon." Is this an appropriate fact for a report on sundials in Ohio? Explain using the article and Priya's observation.

Show worked solution

No. It is not accurate, so it is not appropriate. The article says sun time is not always clock time, and that in much of Ohio in summer the Sun is highest around 1:30 p.m. on the clock. Priya's measurements agree: the shortest of her four measured shadows, 45 centimeters, came at 1:30 p.m., and the shadows at 11:30 and 3:30 were the same, 70 centimeters, on either side of it. Her readings were two hours apart, so they cannot show the exact minute of the shortest shadow; readings taken closer together around 1:30 would locate it better. An appropriate fact must be checked against the sources.

Problem 5

Mark this script line for clear speech and an understandable pace, and explain each mark: "My stick was one hundred centimeters tall and at nine thirty its shadow was one hundred fifty centimeters but at one thirty it was only forty-five."

Show worked solution

For example: "My stick was one hundred centimeters tall. // At nine thirty / its shadow was one hundred fifty centimeters. // But at one thirty / it was only forty-five. //" Breaking the run-on line into sentences gives places for full pauses (//); short pauses (/) separate the time from the measurement. The three numbers should be underlined and said slowly, because listeners must remember them. Credit needs pauses at sentence ends and a plan to slow down for the numbers.

Problem 6

After a rehearsal, Priya's partner says, "You went so fast I couldn't catch the numbers, and I didn't understand the word you used for the part that makes the shadow." Name two changes Priya should make and explain why each helps.

Show worked solution

Slow down and pause before and after each number, because numbers are what listeners must remember and cannot reread. Practice the term gnomon until she can say it smoothly and clearly, and explain it the first time she uses it, so listeners know the word. She can also speak louder and face the audience, and check again by asking the partner to repeat one number. Any two changes with reasons earn credit.

Problem 7

Marco used these sources for a report on bird feeders. Write his list of sources in the pattern taught in this lesson, in alphabetical order. (1) A book, Feeder Friends, by Alma Ruiz, Pine Street Press, 2020. (2) A web page, "Choosing Bird Seed," no author given, on the Example Nature Center website, posted March 3, 2025, at https://www.example.org/birdseed, used April 2, 2026. (3) An interview with his neighbor Joan Becker, done by Marco Diaz on April 5, 2026. (4) Marco Diaz's own count of birds at his backyard feeder on April 6, 2026. (All four are invented for this question.)

Show worked solution

Sources Becker, Joan. Interview by Marco Diaz. April 5, 2026. "Choosing Bird Seed." Example Nature Center, March 3, 2025. https://www.example.org/birdseed. April 2, 2026. Diaz, Marco. Count of birds at a backyard feeder. April 6, 2026. Ruiz, Alma. Feeder Friends. Pine Street Press, 2020 (with the title in italics when typed). The web page has no author, so its entry begins with its title and is alphabetized under C. Writing "Used April 2, 2026." for the last date, as in worked example 4, is also correct. Credit needs all four sources, each with the parts of its pattern, in the order Becker, Choosing, Diaz, Ruiz.

Problem 8

A student's list of sources says: "Google. The book about sundials. My grandpa." What is wrong with it, and how should it be fixed?

Show worked solution

Google is a search engine, not a source; it should be replaced by the web pages actually used, each with title, website, date and web address. "The book about sundials" gives no author, title, publisher or year, so no one could find it. "My grandpa" should be an interview entry with his name, "Interview by" the student's name and the date. The fixed entries should be put in alphabetical order. A list of sources must let someone else find each source.