Grades 11–12 · English language artsAbout 180 minutes
English language artsGrades 11–12About 180 minutes

Analyze foundational U.S. documents from the seventeenth to nineteenth centuries for their themes, purposes and rhetorical features, and read complex literary nonfiction proficiently

Several sessions for close reading, discussion, modeled analysis, independent analytical writing and revision. The original texts here are short models; they do not by themselves establish reading range or mastery at the high end of the grades 11-CCR text complexity band.

Ohio learning standards this draft targets

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ela-2017:RI.11-12.9 Analyze seventeenth-, eighteenth-, and nineteenth-century foundational U.S. documents of historical and literary significance (including The Declaration of Independence, the Preamble to the Constitution, the Bill of Rights, and Lincoln's Second Inaugural Address) for their themes, purposes, and rhetorical features.

ela-2017:RI.11-12.10 By the end of grade 11, read and comprehend literary nonfiction in the grades 11-CCR text complexity band proficiently, with scaffolding as needed at the high end of the range. By the end of grade 12, read and comprehend literary nonfiction at the high end of the grades 11-CCR text complexity band independently and proficiently.

Provisional targets. Clause-by-clause educational review is still pending.

Section 1 · LearnLearn the idea
Five documents spanning 245 years, from the Mayflower Compact of 1620 to Lincoln's Second Inaugural Address of 1865: one from the seventeenth century, three from the eighteenth (the Bill of Rights was proposed in 1789 and ratified in 1791) and one from the nineteenth, each with its purpose and one rhetorical feature.Five documents spanning 245 years, from the Mayflower Compact of 1620 to Lincoln's Second Inaugural Address of 1865: one from the seventeenth century, three from the eighteenth (the Bill of Rights was proposed in 1789 and ratified in 1791) and one from the nineteenth, each with its purpose and one rhetorical feature.Five foundational documents: purpose and onefeatureDocumentYearPurposeFeatureMayflowerCompact1620Create order forthe colonyDoubled verbs:covenant andcombineDeclaration ofIndependence1776Justifyseparation tomankindPremise,concession,grievances,conclusionPreamble1787Name the sourceand aims ofauthoritySix parallelpurposes beforethe verbBill of Rights1789 to 1791Preventmisconstructionor abuse ofpowersProhibitions:Congress shallmake no lawSecond Inaugural1865Interpret thewar; preparereunionAntithesis; withmalice towardnone
Five documents spanning 245 years, from the Mayflower Compact of 1620 to Lincoln's Second Inaugural Address of 1865: one from the seventeenth century, three from the eighteenth (the Bill of Rights was proposed in 1789 and ratified in 1791) and one from the nineteenth, each with its purpose and one rhetorical feature.

Learning goal: Analyze seventeenth-, eighteenth- and nineteenth-century foundational U.S. documents of historical and literary significance, including the Declaration of Independence, the Preamble to the Constitution, the Bill of Rights and Lincoln's Second Inaugural Address, for their themes, purposes and rhetorical features. By the end of grade 11, read and comprehend literary nonfiction in the grades 11-CCR text complexity band proficiently, with scaffolding as needed at the high end of the range; by the end of grade 12, read and comprehend literary nonfiction at the high end of the band independently and proficiently.

Three questions for every document. A theme is a central idea the document develops (consent, rights, limits on power, judgment, reconciliation). A purpose is what the document is trying to accomplish for a particular audience at a particular moment. A rhetorical feature is a deliberate choice of language or structure that serves that purpose: parallelism, antithesis, a list, a single long sentence, an allusion. Analysis links the three: this feature serves this purpose by developing this theme.

Seventeenth century: the Mayflower Compact (1620). Before landing, settlers bound for the "northern Parts of Virginia" signed an agreement at Cape Cod in November 1620 in which they "solemnly and mutually, in the Presence of God and one another, covenant and combine ourselves together into a civil Body Politick, for our better Ordering and Preservation." Theme: government created by the agreement of the governed, though the signers still call themselves "Loyal Subjects" of King James. Purpose: to establish order and authority for laws "most meet and convenient for the general Good of the Colony." Rhetoric: the paired and tripled verbs, "covenant and combine," "enact, constitute, and frame," give the act legal and religious weight. It is a starting point for a theme the later documents develop.

The Declaration of Independence (1776). Purpose, stated in its first sentence: "a decent respect to the opinions of mankind requires that they should declare the causes which impel them to the separation." The audience is the world, and the goal is justification. Theme: government rests on consent and exists to secure rights: "Governments are instituted among Men, deriving their just powers from the consent of the governed." Rhetorical features: the structure is an argument. A general premise ("We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal") establishes when a people may abolish a government; the next sentence admits that "Governments long established should not be changed for light and transient causes," a concession that raises the bar; the long list of grievances, introduced by "let Facts be submitted to a candid world" and built from the repeated opening "He has...", supplies the evidence; the conclusion follows. Grouped threes add force: "Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness"; the closing pledge of "our Lives, our Fortunes and our sacred Honor." The clause "it is their right, it is their duty, to throw off such Government" climbs from permission to obligation.

The Preamble to the Constitution (1787). One sentence: "We the People of the United States, in Order to form a more perfect Union, establish Justice, insure domestic Tranquility, provide for the common defence, promote the general Welfare, and secure the Blessings of Liberty to ourselves and our Posterity, do ordain and establish this Constitution for the United States of America." Purpose: to state who is establishing the government and why. Theme: the people, not the states or a king, are the source of authority, a direct development of the Declaration's "consent of the governed." Rhetoric: the subject "We the People" comes first, then six parallel purposes, each an infinitive phrase, and only then the verb, "do ordain and establish." The postponed verb makes the purposes the reason for the act. "A more perfect Union" admits that the union already exists but is imperfect, and "our Posterity" extends the document's reach to future generations.

The Bill of Rights (proposed 1789, ratified 1791). The preamble to the proposed amendments states a purpose: several states had "expressed a desire, in order to prevent misconstruction or abuse of its powers, that further declaratory and restrictive clauses should be added." Theme: limits on the government the Constitution created. Rhetoric: the First Amendment's form, "Congress shall make no law respecting an establishment of religion, or prohibiting the free exercise thereof; or abridging the freedom of speech, or of the press," is a prohibition addressed to government, not a grant to citizens; it presumes the rights already exist. The Ninth Amendment makes that presumption explicit: "The enumeration in the Constitution, of certain rights, shall not be construed to deny or disparage others retained by the people." The Tenth reserves powers "not delegated to the United States by the Constitution, nor prohibited by it to the States," and it reserves them "to the States respectively, or to the people."

Lincoln's Second Inaugural Address (March 4, 1865). Purpose: with the Civil War nearly over, to interpret its meaning and prepare the nation for reunion. Themes: shared responsibility, divine judgment and reconciliation. Lincoln names slavery directly: "These slaves constituted a peculiar and powerful interest. All knew that this interest was somehow the cause of the war." Rhetorical features: antithesis followed by a sudden short sentence, which in Lincoln's manuscript reads "Both parties deprecated war; but one of them would make war rather than let the nation survive; and the other would accept war rather than let it perish. And the war came." (Some transcriptions, including the Avalon text that the other quotations here follow, run the last four words into the long sentence after a comma: "perish, and the war came.") Three more features follow: parallel shared identity, "Both read the same Bible and pray to the same God"; biblical allusion and restraint, "let us judge not, that we be not judged"; and a closing sentence that holds back its main clause behind three parallel phrases and then keeps going: "With malice toward none, with charity for all, with firmness in the right as God gives us to see the right, let us strive on to finish the work we are in, to bind up the nation's wounds, to care for him who shall have borne the battle and for his widow and his orphan, to do all which may achieve and cherish a just and lasting peace among ourselves and with all nations." Its opening is periodic (the main clause is delayed until "let us strive on"); what follows is cumulative, adding one task after another. The address is short, and Lincoln says why: there is "less occasion for an extended address than there was at the first."

How the themes build across documents. Consent (1620, 1776), popular sovereignty (1787), limits on power and retained rights (1789–1791), and a national reckoning with slavery, the deepest contradiction of "all men are created equal" (1865): read together, the documents form a conversation in which later texts test, extend and answer earlier ones.

Reading literary nonfiction at the high end of the band. These texts are complex: long periodic sentences, eighteenth-century vocabulary ("usurpations," "evinces," "ordain") and meaning carried by structure. A grade 11 reader uses scaffolds: marking the main subject and verb in long sentences, a glossary, and a paraphrase of each paragraph. A grade 12 reader, reading at the high end of the band, selects and uses such strategies independently, without teacher-provided scaffolds. Practice on literary nonfiction beyond these documents, for example Frederick Douglass's Narrative (1845), whose chapter 10 turns on the sentence "You have seen how a man was made a slave; you shall see how a slave was made a man," or Henry David Thoreau's essay on civil disobedience (1849), which opens by accepting and then pushing further the motto "That government is best which governs least."

Section 2 · ModelWork through the examples

Worked analysis of a feature, purpose and theme (Declaration): Feature: the concession "Governments long established should not be changed for light and transient causes." Purpose: to persuade "a candid world" that separation is justified. Theme: consent and the right to alter government. Link: by admitting the bar is high, the document makes the list of grievances that follows necessary and the conclusion stronger; the concession is a rhetorical choice that serves justification.

Worked analysis of structure (Preamble): Main clause: "We the People... do ordain and establish this Constitution." Inserted between subject and verb: six purposes in parallel infinitive phrases (form, establish, insure, provide, promote, secure). Effect: the reader cannot reach the verb without passing through the reasons, so authority and purpose are fused. Theme: popular sovereignty, developing "consent of the governed."

Worked scaffolded reading (Lincoln): Passage (Lincoln's manuscript): "Both parties deprecated war; but one of them would make war rather than let the nation survive; and the other would accept war rather than let it perish. And the war came." Step 1, vocabulary: "deprecated" means disapproved of, deplored. Step 2, structure: two balanced clauses ("make war rather than let the nation survive" / "accept war rather than let it perish") followed by a separate four-word sentence. Step 3, paraphrase: neither side wanted war, but one would start it and the other would accept it, and so it happened. Step 4, effect: the short final sentence, standing alone after the long balanced one, makes the war seem to arrive like weather, shifting attention from blame to consequence, which serves the purpose of reconciliation while the preceding clauses still assign different choices to each side.

Section 3 · DoPractice, demonstrate, and explain

Document analysis chart: For the five documents, record year, audience, purpose (quoted where the document states it), central theme and two rhetorical features, each with a quotation of no more than forty words. Draw arrows between documents where a later text develops or tests a theme from an earlier one.

Independent performance: Write a 700–900-word essay analyzing how three of the five documents, including at least one of the four named in the learning goal, treat the theme of where legitimate authority comes from and how it is limited. Success criteria: each document's purpose is identified with evidence; at least two rhetorical features per document are analyzed for how they serve the purpose; the essay shows how at least one later document develops or tests an earlier one; dates and names are accurate; every claim is supported by a quotation.

Independent reading of literary nonfiction: Read a complete chapter of Douglass's Narrative or the full essay by Thoreau. Grade 11: use the scaffolds (sentence marking, glossary, paragraph paraphrase) and record which you needed. Grade 12: read without teacher-provided scaffolds (choosing your own strategies, such as annotation or a dictionary, as needed) and then write a 200-word account of the author's purpose and two rhetorical features. Both: note which sentences you had to reread and why.

Section 4 · Check7-question lesson practice test

An adult may read the prompts aloud. Answer independently with words, objects, drawings or a demonstration before opening the answer guide. Award 1 point for a correct result or claim and 1 point for a matching explanation or demonstration; where a question asks only for a result (a corrected sentence, a spelling, a count), a fully correct result earns both points, and the answer guide shows what a complete response contains. Record prompting separately. The total (two points per question) is local practice feedback, not an Ohio proficiency level.

Problem 1

State the purpose of the Declaration of Independence in its own words and explain how its structure serves that purpose.

Show worked solution

Its first sentence says “a decent respect to the opinions of mankind requires that they should declare the causes which impel them to the separation.” The structure is an argument for that audience: a general premise about rights and consent, a concession that governments should not be changed “for light and transient causes,” a list of grievances submitted “to a candid world,” and a conclusion. The concession raises the bar and makes the evidence necessary.

Problem 2

Analyze how the grammar of the Preamble supports its theme.

Show worked solution

The subject “We the People” comes first; six parallel purposes follow (“form a more perfect Union, establish Justice...”); the verb “do ordain and establish” arrives only at the end. Authority is placed in the people and the purposes are fused to the act of establishing, developing the Declaration’s theme of “consent of the governed” into popular sovereignty.

Problem 3

What does the phrasing “Congress shall make no law” reveal about the Bill of Rights’ view of rights?

Show worked solution

It is a prohibition addressed to the government rather than a grant to citizens, which presumes the rights already exist and the government must not infringe them. The Ninth Amendment makes the presumption explicit: listing some rights “shall not be construed to deny or disparage others retained by the people.”

Problem 4

Explain the effect of “And the war came” in Lincoln’s Second Inaugural Address.

Show worked solution

After a long sentence whose two balanced clauses state that one side “would make war” and the other “would accept war,” the four-word sentence (a separate sentence in Lincoln’s manuscript; some transcriptions attach it after a comma) makes the war seem to arrive almost on its own. It moves attention from blame to consequence, serving the purpose of reconciliation, while the earlier clauses still distinguish the choices of each side.

Problem 5

How does the Mayflower Compact anticipate a theme developed in the Declaration, and how does it differ?

Show worked solution

Its signers “covenant and combine ourselves together into a civil Body Politick,” creating authority by mutual agreement, which anticipates the Declaration’s “consent of the governed.” It differs because the signers still describe themselves as “Loyal Subjects” of King James; the Declaration uses consent to justify ending such allegiance.

Problem 6

Identify two rhetorical features of the closing sentence of the Second Inaugural and connect them to its purpose.

Show worked solution

Parallel phrases (“With malice toward none, with charity for all, with firmness in the right”) set out a moral program in balanced form and delay the main clause (“let us strive on”), a periodic opening. After the main clause the sentence turns cumulative: four infinitive phrases (“to finish the work we are in”; “to bind up the nation’s wounds”; “to care for him who shall have borne the battle”; “to do all which may achieve and cherish a just and lasting peace”) turn the attitude into tasks and carry the sentence outward to “all nations.” Both features serve the purpose of preparing the nation for reunion on terms of charity, not vengeance, while holding to “the right.”

Problem 7

What distinguishes proficient reading of these documents by the end of grade 11 from the end of grade 12?

Show worked solution

By the end of grade 11 a reader comprehends them proficiently with scaffolding as needed at the high end of the band: marking subjects and verbs in periodic sentences, using a glossary for words like “usurpations” and “ordain,” and paraphrasing paragraph by paragraph. By the end of grade 12 the reader comprehends texts at the high end of the band independently and proficiently: no teacher-provided scaffolds, though the reader may still choose strategies such as annotation or a dictionary, and can state purpose and rhetorical features directly.